Open Scene Narration.
The beginning of my thriller will be a scene full of images from a crime scene. There is a dead body on the floor that is unidentified to the audience. The victims body is covered with a sheet and there is detectives surrounding it. The audience will be able to hear the sound of the camera taking images of the scene and sirens from police vehicles in the background. The next scene is a medium shot of the antagonist whilst they are being interviewed, the audience does not yet know that this person is the antagonist, however they will still be wearing dark colours. The police are talking directly to the antagonist but she is unable to comprehend or respond to what they are saying because of the voices in her head. As the scene goes on the apparent voices in her head seem to get louder and louder and more distracting. Eventually she faints because she is unable to handle the noise of all the voices going round in her head; at this point the scene fades to black. When she awakens she can hear shuffling noises and finds herself tied down onto a bed. The antagonist then starts to have graphic flashbacks. The first one is of her boyfriend dead and her in the corner shaking and panicking. The scene turns back to her on the bed with a close up to her face, it then quickly flashes back to another flashback, this time it is of her murdering her boyfriend. The end of the scene shows her smiling as she mutters the words "Our love died, so i guess he had to."
A very brief description of your idea, I am sure you can provide a lot more detail on this... Comment on at the end how you want your audience to respond to this idea.
ReplyDelete-try and make your structure very clear, comment on what will happen at the start, middle and end